Rough Edit Guilt Trip

This is our rough edit. It is not finished as we did not have time to put enough music in, so some parts are a bit quiet. On Thursday we did a viewing with everyone else in our classes' videos being shown, and we got an audience of people to view them. We created a questionnaire, which we posted on survey monkey: http://www.surveymonkey.com/s/L7XVFKJ and also a printed version which people watching the intros could fill in. This was a great chance to see what everyone else in the class had been doing.
Our feedback was quite mixed, a few people noticed the music, which we will improve on final cut. some people said they did not understand the ending, which after we saw it through their eyes, we realised that it could definitely be improved as it is not really very clear. I think this is because when we did the planning, we planned way too much shots for the time of film we had, as we did not realise timings.
With this feedback we can hopefully do a better edit in Final Cut, to make the music more continuous and the storyline better.